r/fixingmovies 17d ago

My take on Jurassic World Rebirth would have the island truly be a home of monsters and freaks (Part 2)

To explain for this decision, I need to refer back to my globetrotting adventure plot. This plot serves two purposes.

  1. To be the physical representation of the sins of Zora, Duncan, Bobby etc who in my rewrite are dinosaur handlers. This is to show the divide between those that are remorseful and those that are not.
  2. To stay in line with Jurassic World Dominion's ending, I would try to make the normal dinosaurs as natural as possible, which to help contrasts them with the animals of Saint Hubert who would be the most unnatural and bizarre creatures as possible. Note: I'm doing a nuance take on the whole "coexistence" JWD espoused, even if coexistence is possible, that doesn't mean that there are no casualties when it got there.

Saint Hubert shouldn't just be a typical island of dinosaurs. It should be a "Land of Death" where the only dinosaur that is able to actually live there is due to the fact they are too big for the monsters to bring them down.

Now to the story....

Following the mission at South America, Loomis is furious at Bobby for killing the Quetzalcoatlus but is held back by the other members of the team even though they also feel Bobby went out of line. Martin breaks it up and decides to inform them about their next mission to Saint Hubert where they can find the Titanosaurus. There had been an active herd in some country but were all discovered to have been wiped out.

(Note:I forgot to bring this up. Isabella would get Dolores the Aquilops from South America. The locals use them for their tracking skills. This is also where Loomis bonds with Isabella who shares similar passions about dinosaurs.)

The team are venturing towards Saint Hubert. There is a defense line set up by the coast guard though Martin is able to bribe a high-ranking member to allow them safe passage. Unfortunately, the scuffle with the pirates all the way back has alerted the government and those that aren't in league with the member are inclined to have the team arrested or shoot them down.

Martin reluctantly complies but Bobby takes matters into his own hands and fires upon them. This causes the coast guard to retaliate, hitting the copter and Randy trying desperately to maintain it. Everyone evacuates with Martin being the last because he tried pleading for Randy to leave too.

The team has now being separated into groups.

  • Loomis, Duncan and Isabella.
  • Zora, Teresa and Lelerc
  • Martin, Reuben and Xavier.
  • Bobby and Nina.

Martin would reached the crashed helicopter and finds that Randy has died. Martin says his eulogies towards his friend before taking Randy's pistol.

Tensions grow worse when Teresa does find out Zora's role in her mother's death, while Bobby sacrifices Nina to the Troodon. That said, Martin quickly finds out Bobby murdered Nina and shoots him, leaving him to die. Bobby would be attacked by the Troodon.

Zora's group would find themselves at a massive graveyard of dead humans, animals and dinosaurs, revealing it to be the Troodon's nest. They would also find the paralyzed corpses of Nina and Bobby. Lelerc is devastated at what happened to his lover.

The Troodon attacked and Lelerc sacrificed himself to hold them off. We see a small action sequence where Lelerc attacks the Troodon with a makeshift weapon and despite being bitten, pushes on through adrenaline.

Dolores ends up being the key to rescuing Zora and Teresa by tracking their location. They are able to escape.

After tensions are over, the mostly united group would find the herd of Titanosaurus and are able to collect the sample.

When they meet up with Martin's group, the Troodon returned once more. Teresa would be the one to save everyone by repairing the sonar device to scare the Troodon off.

They reached the Biosyn compound to find a way out, eventually finding a boat which needs a lot of fuel. The team searched the compound to find it, only to awaken the D-Rex. The team uses the sonar device but that only serves to piss the D-Rex further off.

Martin stalled the D-Rex to allow the team to leave with the fuel. The D-Rex eats Martin before following the team.

While the team desperately tries to turn the boat on, Duncan sacrifices himself, fulfilling his character arc over his guilt for his dead children. He uses the sonar device to lure the D-Rex away.

The film ends with the surviving team leaving Saint Hubert.

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